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Yukinara
04-22-2012, 06:36 AM
Hi guys, I'm looking for a beta-reader for my 70k YA sci-fi novel. The book has gone through some beta-readers and I did make major changes to it. Now I need 1 or 2 more. well, just to give a fresh analysis and see how it can be better.

Even though the whole thing is around 70k words, right now I already finished fixing chapter 5 so the amount to read is only about 15k. If you are interested, please PM me.

Title: Fallen Star Story: The Exile
Genres: sci-fi, action, YA.

Kai is the last prince of a once powerful Empire in the galaxy. He is spending a peaceful life on a deserted island on the planet of Pisca-3 with his teachers until catastrophe strikes his home. A powerful man on this planet invades the island to take away the most precious flowers in the galaxy. Kai successfully defenses his home but suffer serious injury in the process. Later he separates from his teachers and joins a mercenary group has to venture out to the vast galaxy again to find his beloved and discover his true identity.

Sage
04-22-2012, 06:44 AM
You should include the pitch so potential betas will know what it's about.