My mother is getting older, so her eyes are not what they used to be. She reads a lot, but she's busy with her very large extended family. She's also not super tech-savvy. So I did what I could to make things as easy as possible. I put my draft in Kindle format, sent her the link to download Kindle-for-PC and sent her the Kindle book file.
Her first message says, "I haven't had time to start it yet. I was out of town because Auntie A is house-sitting for Auntie B and she locked herself out and Auntie B almost had to turn around halfway to Florida and come back and...."
Cool, Mom. Take your time.
Her second message says, "So, I didn't get to read much. I like to read when I'm in bed and I can't because I have to sit at the computer. So I think I got through maybe just one chapter. But so far I think it's going to need a lot of... editing. "
I die inside a little bit. This is the woman who told me my macaroni necklaces were the best jewelry ever back when I was in Kindergarten. But still, the first chapter is not much at all like the rest of the book -- I really went crazy with the metaphorical imagery, trying to convey the point of view of someone in a deep depression. So she didn't get it and that's OK.
I suck it up, re-write the first chapter and send her a new Kindle file.
Still waiting to hear back.
To be continued...
Oh, and I'm looking for Beta readers, by the way. I have a 97000 word contemporary fantasy with a freshly rewritten first chapter. Even if you just want to take a look at that one chapter and tell me if it makes sense to you, that'd be appreciated. Also, I'm happy to read for anyone and offer feedback as well.
--Vania
Her first message says, "I haven't had time to start it yet. I was out of town because Auntie A is house-sitting for Auntie B and she locked herself out and Auntie B almost had to turn around halfway to Florida and come back and...."
Cool, Mom. Take your time.
Her second message says, "So, I didn't get to read much. I like to read when I'm in bed and I can't because I have to sit at the computer. So I think I got through maybe just one chapter. But so far I think it's going to need a lot of... editing. "
I die inside a little bit. This is the woman who told me my macaroni necklaces were the best jewelry ever back when I was in Kindergarten. But still, the first chapter is not much at all like the rest of the book -- I really went crazy with the metaphorical imagery, trying to convey the point of view of someone in a deep depression. So she didn't get it and that's OK.
I suck it up, re-write the first chapter and send her a new Kindle file.
Still waiting to hear back.
To be continued...
Oh, and I'm looking for Beta readers, by the way. I have a 97000 word contemporary fantasy with a freshly rewritten first chapter. Even if you just want to take a look at that one chapter and tell me if it makes sense to you, that'd be appreciated. Also, I'm happy to read for anyone and offer feedback as well.
--Vania