View Full Version : Searching Beta/Mentor MG Fantasy The Rooftop Children

04-03-2012, 07:15 PM
I've just finished version 4 of my middle grade novel and thought it would be nice to get some objective feedback. I would prefer someone who's familiar with (recent) middle grade fantasy.It would be great if my reader is willing to point out any grammar or spelling errors as well, but it's no must for me (i'm not a native english speaker, so while i try doing my best, i have no doubt there will certainly still be some mistakes left). I'm willing to look at the beta's middle grade novel in return, but I don't think I currently would have the time to really do line comments.

Here is the beginning of my novel:


04-06-2012, 09:36 PM
found my beta reader; thank you AW

04-06-2012, 11:57 PM
We like a happy ending. Hope it all works out fabulously!