I'm very new at this. I have stories churning in my head and I want to tell them. I do it all the time, in real life. Mostly in bars. I started writing them down and find I really enjoy it. Unfortunately, I don't seem to know many of the rules. My grammer aint what it should be. My punctuation sucks. I'm not that hot with sentence structure either. A mess, eh?
Anyway, I'd sure like to find someone or a bunch of someones who'd be willing to help me out. I sure need a lot of it.
A few days back, in a moment of enthusiasm, I sent a manuscript off to a publisher. Alas, it was rejected. The rejection though did include a most thorough critique. Much more attention then I expected and very appreciated. In the critique, many flaws in my work were pointed out to me. Some of the flaws are mearly mechanics but I need to know those things. Some of the flaws pointed out, have to do with the story itself. I want to ask the publisher more about the things pointed out but I'm afraid I'd be pushing a wee bit.
What I'm looking for, is someone who would be willing to spend a lot of their precious time, spoon feeding me.
My stories are fiction. Probably mainstream. I have no aspirations of writing the great America novel. I only want to spin yarns and entertain readers. Making a buck along the way would be ok too.
Any volunteers?
Anyway, I'd sure like to find someone or a bunch of someones who'd be willing to help me out. I sure need a lot of it.
A few days back, in a moment of enthusiasm, I sent a manuscript off to a publisher. Alas, it was rejected. The rejection though did include a most thorough critique. Much more attention then I expected and very appreciated. In the critique, many flaws in my work were pointed out to me. Some of the flaws are mearly mechanics but I need to know those things. Some of the flaws pointed out, have to do with the story itself. I want to ask the publisher more about the things pointed out but I'm afraid I'd be pushing a wee bit.
What I'm looking for, is someone who would be willing to spend a lot of their precious time, spoon feeding me.
My stories are fiction. Probably mainstream. I have no aspirations of writing the great America novel. I only want to spin yarns and entertain readers. Making a buck along the way would be ok too.
Any volunteers?