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Simple.

Mine is:

“The hell is a ‘brain cell’?”
 

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the fourth of these but you need the other three for some sort of context ...

42 year old Lars Swensen was asleep on his bed. He lay on his back, nude, with no covers over him. The air conditioning was turned on to MAX in order to keep the Kangaroo on the other bed cool. It was nude too.
 

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On second thought, mine isn't very good.

*goes back to editing*

*deletes 8k of 10k WIP*

*stares at cursor*

*deletes remaining 2k*

*stares at cursor*


"In the beginning...
 
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The beer fart, a holdover from the previous night’s festivities, and the worst kind of fart there is, wafted up to fill the small space and combined fumes with the scent of fresh urine to exacerbate my discomfort.
 
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The beer fart, a holdover from the previous night’s festivities, and the worst kind of fart there is, wafted up to fill the small space and combined fumes with the scent of fresh urine to exacerbate my discomfort.

As a connoisseur of fart jokes, I find this eloquent, satisfying, and with just the right amount of oaky texture to make it palatable. I approve. :D
 

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great thread here is one of mine

''It was symphonically gravitating almost gyrating, something about this painting that hanged solely on this wall had him gripped.'':)
 

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The beer fart, a holdover from the previous night’s festivities, and the worst kind of fart there is, wafted up to fill the small space and combined fumes with the scent of fresh urine to exacerbate my discomfort.

As a connoisseur of fart jokes, I find this eloquent, satisfying, and with just the right amount of oaky texture to make it palatable. I approve. :D

Thank you. I had to choose between that line and the one that followed.

My car stank like the men’s room at a truck stop.
 

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from my paranormal rom

I just read again the posts prior to mine!!I could swear I read them earlier but my brain must have switched off. But I can tell you my line just cannot cannot compare..totally outmatched:)

Maybe I should just remove it?

"When you’re hurt you fight, but when you’re angry you burn your bridges"
 
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