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EternallyStressed

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I'm hoping someone would be willing to have a quick look at a very short piece (174 words). I'm particularly looking for feedback on grammar and punctuation, as I have been told I have no grasp of it :)

I have a thick skin so no worries about offending me.

The piece is being put on my own website, but would really like to get the basics right.

Thanks in advance
 

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I'll have a go, if you want. Can't guarantee quality comments though :)
 
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