PDA

View Full Version : Writter Critter



EternallyStressed
01-07-2012, 06:49 PM
I'm hoping someone would be willing to have a quick look at a very short piece (174 words). I'm particularly looking for feedback on grammar and punctuation, as I have been told I have no grasp of it :)

I have a thick skin so no worries about offending me.

The piece is being put on my own website, but would really like to get the basics right.

Thanks in advance

Strom
01-08-2012, 10:26 PM
I'll have a go, if you want. Can't guarantee quality comments though :)