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Short story Callie 800 words, anyone?

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Sarah G

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Hey guys,

I have recently completed my first short story, I think it's Fantasy, and would really appreciate a beta reader.

I'm kind of looking for someone who can look at the plot, grammar as I know that's not my strongest point and basically tell me if it sucks or not, hopefully politely.:)

The story is called Callie, for the moment, and is about 800 words.

Thanks Sarah.
 

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I'd be willing to look it over. Feel free to PM me the entire text, or if you'd prefer, request my e-mail address through PM.
 

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Sorted, thanks guys.
 
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