I am writing a story and need feedback from everyone. Not critiquing, unfortunately, however I need help with how to make the dialogue and thoughts of the characters (of both gender) believable. Any hints?
I think this is the wrong forum for your question SummerSurf57. You've already been told by other mods to participate in the discussions here. This place is for give and take, not just take. Don't build up your post count by asking for help without being prepared to offer it in return.
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