View Full Version : Want First Opinions on YA Paranormal Novel Excerpt

11-20-2011, 11:29 PM
I've written a novel, and I'm not sure if it is any good at all; I'm not aiming for publication for it right now, not until it has done a lot more rewrites anyway. I am curious to know what you think of it, as a rough piece - I am quite new to writing, and just want to know if I am heading in the right direction with it.

So, if you have the time, I was wondering if you could take a quick look at this one scene from my novel- I will PM it to anyone who wants to read it, and I would be really grateful!

Thanks for your time, have a good weekend

11-21-2011, 12:17 AM

If you'll play around on the board a bit and get your post count up to 50 (you can do it in a day or two), you can post scenes in Share Your Work for feedback. That way you don't need a beta for something so short.

11-21-2011, 01:03 AM
Thanks for the advice, could you send me a link to this forum please; and I'll start getting my post count up now :)