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Hi everyone,
I'm in the process of trying to write a short science fiction story. The key word is short story - I want to turn this into a script of no more than 6 pages at some point in the future.
Here's what has come to me so far. Any ideas, suggestions, whatnot would be most appreciated! Keep in mind that this is all brainstorming and quite rough =)
I'm seeing three characters at most, two of which would need to be characterized well, the third less so. I'm getting glimpses of a political figure of some sort sitting on a judgement seat a la Rome. He's clearly THE one in charge. The story seems to be narrated by one of this political figures body guards (bodyguardA for lack of a better name). I get the feeling that a war is happening offworld and the leader is has power over one of two great factions.
Now comes the odd part.. I'm seeing a character with a marking of some sort on his body (maybe a tattoo? Or perhaps something more scientifically advanced?) which indicates his allegiance to a sect of anti-governement rebels turned assassin. The presence of this rebel group seems to permeate the society in distressing frequency though the political figures refuse to acknowledge the group. I see this character using his association with this sect to gain access to the "high level political figure" in an assassination attempt. Maybe he's even someone the political figure knows and therefore does not suspect? Somehow the assassination attempt (which seems to utilize a composite knife due to its ease of hiding and undetectable signature. Of course the government is not prepared for or expecting this sort of "crude" means of assassination) doesn't go as planned and one body guard is killed in the process. Bodyguard A from above responds by killing the assassin.
The assassination attemp has a profound affect on the people (for which reason I'm still trying to discover). It turns out in the end that the "Bodyguard A" is also a member of this rebel group and the whole event was planned as it unfolded (ie the bodyguard was supposed to kill his own assassin friend). What I'm struggling with is the reason for this strange turn of events. Why does the act of attempted assassination matter so much? Why not just assassinate the guy if the group is a bunch of rebels? What is to gain for the rebel group? How do I make these characters unique? What role does science play in all of this (it seems to perhaps be related to the agenda of the rebel group).
Help! I've hit a wall and need some people with which to bounce this idea around!
I'm in the process of trying to write a short science fiction story. The key word is short story - I want to turn this into a script of no more than 6 pages at some point in the future.
Here's what has come to me so far. Any ideas, suggestions, whatnot would be most appreciated! Keep in mind that this is all brainstorming and quite rough =)
I'm seeing three characters at most, two of which would need to be characterized well, the third less so. I'm getting glimpses of a political figure of some sort sitting on a judgement seat a la Rome. He's clearly THE one in charge. The story seems to be narrated by one of this political figures body guards (bodyguardA for lack of a better name). I get the feeling that a war is happening offworld and the leader is has power over one of two great factions.
Now comes the odd part.. I'm seeing a character with a marking of some sort on his body (maybe a tattoo? Or perhaps something more scientifically advanced?) which indicates his allegiance to a sect of anti-governement rebels turned assassin. The presence of this rebel group seems to permeate the society in distressing frequency though the political figures refuse to acknowledge the group. I see this character using his association with this sect to gain access to the "high level political figure" in an assassination attempt. Maybe he's even someone the political figure knows and therefore does not suspect? Somehow the assassination attempt (which seems to utilize a composite knife due to its ease of hiding and undetectable signature. Of course the government is not prepared for or expecting this sort of "crude" means of assassination) doesn't go as planned and one body guard is killed in the process. Bodyguard A from above responds by killing the assassin.
The assassination attemp has a profound affect on the people (for which reason I'm still trying to discover). It turns out in the end that the "Bodyguard A" is also a member of this rebel group and the whole event was planned as it unfolded (ie the bodyguard was supposed to kill his own assassin friend). What I'm struggling with is the reason for this strange turn of events. Why does the act of attempted assassination matter so much? Why not just assassinate the guy if the group is a bunch of rebels? What is to gain for the rebel group? How do I make these characters unique? What role does science play in all of this (it seems to perhaps be related to the agenda of the rebel group).
Help! I've hit a wall and need some people with which to bounce this idea around!