I am so glad to get this first rejection letter done with. For a minute there I was afraid I might get an offer on my first partial submission. (A result of my query letter) It would have ruined all this fun I am having getting rejected. Is this a very nice rejection letter? Read for yourselves and comment.
Dear ------
“ Thank you for the opportunity to give your story, ---------, a preliminary review. Though intrigued by some aspects of the sample chapters, we were not sufficiently enthusiastic to consider representation.”
“ I’m afraid ---‘s overcrowded development schedule does not allow us to offer you more editorial commentary at this time.”
“ All our decisions are based on a frank assessment of the literary and film marketplace. I urge you to submit your project to other agencies and management companies; perhaps another representative will have a different opinion.
“Bla, Bla, Bla”
Kind regards,
Dear ------
“ Thank you for the opportunity to give your story, ---------, a preliminary review. Though intrigued by some aspects of the sample chapters, we were not sufficiently enthusiastic to consider representation.”
“ I’m afraid ---‘s overcrowded development schedule does not allow us to offer you more editorial commentary at this time.”
“ All our decisions are based on a frank assessment of the literary and film marketplace. I urge you to submit your project to other agencies and management companies; perhaps another representative will have a different opinion.
“Bla, Bla, Bla”
Kind regards,
