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emmyshimmy
10-11-2011, 08:06 PM
Help I need a Brit! I need help Britishizing my story. It involves and alternate universe where WWI never ended. I have posted in SYW if anyone is interested. I could use help polishing my male lead who needs to be the epitome of an English gentleman of that era. Thank you for your interest!

samw11
10-11-2011, 08:17 PM
am female and maybe a bit modern... but if that's ok I'll give it a whirl?

Shakesbear
10-11-2011, 08:24 PM
Emmyshimmy could you give us a link please? (I'm too lazy to go and look, sorry!) Also, have you heard of/seen Downton Abbey? Set at the moment during WWI and has characters from the Upper to the lower classes.

LadyA
10-11-2011, 08:54 PM
Watch Downton Abbey. Not only will it be helpful, but you can have a good ogle at Dan Stevens and his amazing-yet-freaky pale eyes...

Or you could watch Poirot/Miss Marple - a bit later on (20s/30s) but lots of young gentlemen, even if quite a few are murderers.

emmyshimmy
10-11-2011, 10:25 PM
Link-http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=227071
that is the current installment. I will post the first chapter link when I can find it (was a while ago and is now buried).

emmyshimmy
10-11-2011, 10:41 PM
chapter 1 link http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?p=6634914#post6634914

Cath
10-12-2011, 04:16 AM
Emmy, I think this is a more appropriate place to ask for a crit than Story Research.

emmyshimmy
10-12-2011, 06:25 PM
Thank you Cath, sorry for misplacing it :/

emmyshimmy
10-12-2011, 06:43 PM
Has anyone had a chance to look at my work? How can I make my lead into more of a British gentleman?

Shakesbear
10-12-2011, 07:50 PM
Can someone please pm me the password, thanks!

emmyshimmy
10-12-2011, 11:11 PM
The password is available in the description of the SYW board. It is not a secret just don't want robots in there.