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thebloodfiend
10-09-2011, 10:04 PM
I'm looking for a beta reader for my script. This is a third or fourth draft and I'm looking for feedback specifically on the ending, which I don't think works. Here's the info:


Title: Jason and Arianna
Genre: Comedy/Drama
Log Line: An uptight lawyer and his alcoholic ex are forced to make amends when their son decides he wants to meet her.
Pages: 98

(500) Days of Summer meets Blue Valentine, sans the indier-than-thou plotless melodrama. If I'm lucky, it might remind you of happythankyoumoreplease.


If you're interested, shoot me a PM. I'll also return reads on screenplays and short stories, but I'm backed up on manuscripts right now.