Hi everyone!
I'm looking for betas for my YA punk urban fantasy, The Road to Pieces. The entire thing is 99,000 words but if you only want to read half or several chapters I'm open to that to!
Pitch is:
"Fifteen-year-old Amanda Javeaux spends her free time running life’s red lights—sharing ice cream cones with demon boys and climbing barbed wire fences in the middle of the night. Ever since her demon-slayer mother took her twin sister away, Amanda hasn’t had anything to live for except another night to throw her life away.
Until she finds the Downside, a demon netherworld fueled by strobe lights and secrets. Here, Amanda is about to find answers at a price she’s not sure she wants to pay. After all, there’s only one rule in the Downside: There are no rules.
In a journey full of blind dives of faith, wavering alliances, and a demonic mosh pit, Amanda is thrown together with an angry young angel who runs a fight club in the school parking lot, a slayer prodigy who can’t forget how her demon-slaying agency killed her boyfriend, and the demon boy Amanda’s afraid to love. Together, they’ll fight to untangle their connected pasts, and defy the fate that was set for them."
First chapter available here.
At the moment, I'm not open for swapping more than 3 or so chapters, but if you beta for me I will DEFINITELY remember you and owe you a favor back (to be fulfilled around December due to a very hard semester at school).
Reply to this thread or PM me if interested! (I'm looking for anything I can get--general opinions, were you hooked the entire time, weaknesses in plot, likable/unlikable characters, or any other feedback you're comfortable with.)
Thanks ahead of time to everyone for helping out! You guys are great
I'm looking for betas for my YA punk urban fantasy, The Road to Pieces. The entire thing is 99,000 words but if you only want to read half or several chapters I'm open to that to!
Pitch is:
"Fifteen-year-old Amanda Javeaux spends her free time running life’s red lights—sharing ice cream cones with demon boys and climbing barbed wire fences in the middle of the night. Ever since her demon-slayer mother took her twin sister away, Amanda hasn’t had anything to live for except another night to throw her life away.
Until she finds the Downside, a demon netherworld fueled by strobe lights and secrets. Here, Amanda is about to find answers at a price she’s not sure she wants to pay. After all, there’s only one rule in the Downside: There are no rules.
In a journey full of blind dives of faith, wavering alliances, and a demonic mosh pit, Amanda is thrown together with an angry young angel who runs a fight club in the school parking lot, a slayer prodigy who can’t forget how her demon-slaying agency killed her boyfriend, and the demon boy Amanda’s afraid to love. Together, they’ll fight to untangle their connected pasts, and defy the fate that was set for them."
First chapter available here.
At the moment, I'm not open for swapping more than 3 or so chapters, but if you beta for me I will DEFINITELY remember you and owe you a favor back (to be fulfilled around December due to a very hard semester at school).
Reply to this thread or PM me if interested! (I'm looking for anything I can get--general opinions, were you hooked the entire time, weaknesses in plot, likable/unlikable characters, or any other feedback you're comfortable with.)
Thanks ahead of time to everyone for helping out! You guys are great
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