View Full Version : Looking for a honest critical analysis from a professional level Writer

Dave A. Law
11-22-2005, 07:56 PM
I知 looking for a professional level writer to take a look at the first chapter of my latest work-in-progress, a mystery novel. By professional I知 referring to someone who has had at least one book published or a few stories published in a professional level magazine. The chapter has been revised several times and has gone through peer reviews by fellow writers, who have helped me to reach my current skill level. This is representative of my best writing to date. Now I知 looking for honest feedback on what I need to work on to obtain the next level with my writing.

Dave A. Law

12-17-2005, 05:05 AM

I'm not sure if you've been contacted but I'd be happy to look over your chapter and offer comments. I've published four books and have two more coming out. I'm a fan of mysteries too.

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