View Full Version : First and/or Second Chapter Romance Beta/Swap?

Chiquita Banana
09-11-2011, 04:19 AM
Hi everyone.

I've got two projects I'm working on and I really need to know which one is stronger. Specifically, I need to know which one stands a better chance of breaking in to the romance market. Both stories are aimed at Mills & Boon Cherish/Riva (Harlequin Romance in N. America). So they're tame, rather than sexy. And not a supernatural force to be found. :)

As much as I appreciate input from all critters, I'm really looking for someone who's familiar with the romance game - and who will be able to tell me if the heros are alpha enough, if I've unveiled enough conflict for the beginning of the story, if I've unveiled too much and it slows the pace, etc.

I would be more than happy to do an exchange.