Hey folks! I have a story I wrote about five years ago. It's been rewritten several times and rejected many, many more (probably about 10 all told). Care to take a look and see what might be wrong with it? I'm willing to swap for a story or excerpt of similar size.
It's mainstream contemporary, with a humorous flavor, 2700 words.
Nutshell: Julia Fulton brushes off the latest diet fad--The Gulf Coast Diet--only to find it has worked miracles for her adult daughter. But there is more than meets the eye to the diet's most fervent adherents, of which Julia's daughter is one . . .
It's mainstream contemporary, with a humorous flavor, 2700 words.
Nutshell: Julia Fulton brushes off the latest diet fad--The Gulf Coast Diet--only to find it has worked miracles for her adult daughter. But there is more than meets the eye to the diet's most fervent adherents, of which Julia's daughter is one . . .
still need one?