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“His shirt rippled and flailed when a gust of wind pressed his back, pushing the mist so that it flowed past him like a river.”
Is this an example of a dangling participle? As in, is it unclear what is pushing the mist? It seems fine to me, but then, I wrote it, and I know what I’m saying. I’m a bit keen on the construction because it contrasts the sentences around it, but if it just looks plain bad, I’ll scrap it.
Elijah
Eagerly awaiting any opinion.
Is this an example of a dangling participle? As in, is it unclear what is pushing the mist? It seems fine to me, but then, I wrote it, and I know what I’m saying. I’m a bit keen on the construction because it contrasts the sentences around it, but if it just looks plain bad, I’ll scrap it.
Elijah
Eagerly awaiting any opinion.