I am seeking a few good beta readers for my sci-fi novel. Nothing elaborate yet since it is still in rewrite. My challenge is story expansion, so questions and thoughts you have while reading would be most helpful. Plot holes and character development are also on my radar for this draft.
I plan to be submitting it for publication after the next rewrite.
Here's a teaser in progress:
It was risky for Michael to pitch a suicide for a potential television series at MuditaCorp.
His boss, Bannon, told him to take a risk.
She did not tell him to take that risk.
He certainly wouldn’t have taken it if he knew the man with the gun against his forehead was her ex.
Not just any ex, but the one who also founded MuditaCorp. Face Anton, who no one had seen for nearly a decade.
Thanks!
I plan to be submitting it for publication after the next rewrite.
Here's a teaser in progress:
It was risky for Michael to pitch a suicide for a potential television series at MuditaCorp.
His boss, Bannon, told him to take a risk.
She did not tell him to take that risk.
He certainly wouldn’t have taken it if he knew the man with the gun against his forehead was her ex.
Not just any ex, but the one who also founded MuditaCorp. Face Anton, who no one had seen for nearly a decade.
Thanks!