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I'm wondering if because I have mixed them in these four sentences if they are technically incorrect, or possibly correct but awkward because of their construction? I also wonder if the one with 'that' in it reads better without the "that'?
A group of little children attempted to escape the heat, laughing and stamping their feet in a puddle of mud created by a tap leaking on their front yard.
A nun in a black habit bent over, singing and clipping bushes near the steps that led toward the frosted glass doors.
A nun in a black habit bent over, singing and clipping bushes near the steps leading toward the frosted glass doors.
ETA: Forgot this one.
Sylvia shuddered as she sat beside her mother — a coldness sweeping over her, wiping away the humidity, before beads of sweat settled on her forehead.
A group of little children attempted to escape the heat, laughing and stamping their feet in a puddle of mud created by a tap leaking on their front yard.
A nun in a black habit bent over, singing and clipping bushes near the steps that led toward the frosted glass doors.
A nun in a black habit bent over, singing and clipping bushes near the steps leading toward the frosted glass doors.
ETA: Forgot this one.
Sylvia shuddered as she sat beside her mother — a coldness sweeping over her, wiping away the humidity, before beads of sweat settled on her forehead.
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