Sometimes, I wonder who the writer is... Worse than kids loll. I'd like your advice on my problem :
The genre is fantasy romance. Hero and Heroin are about to find the magical place they are looking for for a while, but they are supposed to have a fight about their own responsabilities in life/ill behaviour toward each other.
Unfortunately, Prince Charming and his lady apparently decide on their own not to cat-fight. I am in the third attempt for that scene, and they all ended with the lady being concern, and the knight being accomodating. I wonder if I should make a fourth attempt at it, or just let the scene flows its way and reword the plot.
Did such a thing happen to any of you before?
Thanks,
The genre is fantasy romance. Hero and Heroin are about to find the magical place they are looking for for a while, but they are supposed to have a fight about their own responsabilities in life/ill behaviour toward each other.
Unfortunately, Prince Charming and his lady apparently decide on their own not to cat-fight. I am in the third attempt for that scene, and they all ended with the lady being concern, and the knight being accomodating. I wonder if I should make a fourth attempt at it, or just let the scene flows its way and reword the plot.
Did such a thing happen to any of you before?
Thanks,
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