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joeyc
08-12-2011, 12:23 AM
Trying this again.

The last beta reader I had was incredibly helpful, but I need more eyes.

My trusted group of real life people aren't doing a very good job, so now I'm turning to the internet again.

Winter Tides - High Fantasy on the high seas.

A civil war that began as a bid for power threatens to shift the balance of the world.

When the crew of the Blue Falcon rescues the lone survivor of a derelict ship from certain death they are branded traitors by the government.

They are left with only two options: Fight for the resistance or go on the run.

Unfortunately, both sides of the conflict have dirty secrets best kept untold. The only truth lies atop the world, hidden underneath the ice.

Merlumen
08-12-2011, 12:37 PM
Your summary's a little vague but I'm interested! I can do line-by-line edits or just the overall picture.. I'm not really knowledgeable about politics (if that's in there) but war, fantasy and secrets are always good!

joeyc
08-12-2011, 06:04 PM
Yeah, I need to work on my summaries.

amora10
08-12-2011, 10:02 PM
Sounds interesting. I'd be willing to look at it.