How's this for a hook?

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PhotoHutch

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"An amateur photographer documents his torrid affair with a taxidermist."

Though not from a book, I did stumble upon this one flipping channels late last evening. I'm sure there are far worse one's out there, but this one kind of stood out.

-Steve

FYI, I kept flipping. . . .
 

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I don't consider that a hook at all. It's just a one line synopsis. I don't really believe in hooks, for that matter, but if I did, that "hook" could be written with any two professions, and still read the same.

A real "hook" makes me wonder what the heck happens next, and gives me a reason to care.
 

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I agree with Mr. Ritchie. That's more a logline, a very brief synopsis designed to give the reader or viewer a general idea what a story is about.
 

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"An amateur photographer documents his torrid affair with a taxidermist."
I would have been riveted to that movie all night. Unless another movie about a stamp collector and a mortuary attendant was on a rival channel.

-Derek
 
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