Far be it for me to disagree with Uncle Jim...
But it's okay to give me a disrespectful *Sigh*, because I'm just a silly unreasonable girl?
I don't appreciate that at all.
But for the rest of us mere mortals, I think that it hurts us to fight standard boiler plate contract language.
And again, I've never been give a contract with this language in it, and I don't think it's at all unreasonable to ask that changes be done with approval. The clause I've always seen is basically "With Author's approval not to be reasonably withheld," or similar. If it's okay to have the discussion and have the publisher make assurances that the changes will be small etc., I don't see why it's such a big deal to say, "Can I just add this line to my contract, then, before I send it back: &c?"
Lastly, I will repeat my question.
How many AWers have had a problem with editors rewriting a major portion of their story???
Who said it had to be major rewrites?
I've dealt with small press editors before who so completely lacked imagination that they attempted to remove every wordplay, every bit of style, every bit of imagery and individuality from my work. I've had small press editors refuse to let me start sentences with "And," "but," or "because," or to end them with prepositions. I've had small-press editors who insisted my characters say "May I" instead of "Can I," so they walked around sounding like English professors. Or who added exclamation points to half the dialogue. I know of small-press editors who refused to allow contractions in exposition, or who apparently subscribed to the "said is dead" philosophy and tried to add numerous "creative" dialogue tags. I know of small-press editors who do in fact rewrite sections of books; I had some of my dialogue rewritten once, in fact, and it still grates on me.
It doesn't have to be a major rewrite to make the story feel like it's no longer yours. Nor does it have to be a major rewrite to make you feel like you'd rather not have your name on that clunky, voiceless volume of bore anymore. Never underestimate the power of a nitpicky, overly literally-minded copyeditor to completely destroy your work.
It is my argument that editors just don't do it. If any major or significant changes need to be made, the editor will ask the author to do it.
Except the contract says they don't have to, so why would they bother? Sure, they probably will. But maybe they won't, and if they're so insistent on having the right to make whatever changes they want I wonder why they're so insistent. (And again, it doesn't have to be whole scenes rewritten to ruin the story.)
So again, any AWers have any examples of an editor taking it upon themselves to rewrite or signicantly change your story???
See above.
Lastly, FWIW, my publications are limited to newspapers and magazines and the occasional contest so I will admit to not being as knowledgeable as those of you who've had book publications.
It wouldn't surprise me to find the bit about edits w/o author approval is standard for articles etc. For fiction? It's not. Not in my experience, and obviously not in Uncle Jim's experience either. As I said in my initial post, I have never seen a contract with that in it and wouldn't sign it.
It's all well and good to say "You don't want to pass up the chance to be published." But again, I can speak
from experience in saying that one day you might really wish you
had passed up that chance, because there's a clunky, badly edited story out there with your name on it.