View Full Version : 8k word dark fantasy seeks beta readers for hyper-critical crits

07-17-2011, 08:03 AM
The story lives here: http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=217824

I got some readers for an earlier version--I didn't want to make a second thread for it, so I just tacked it onto the end.

Post one has links that go to every scene, which are their own posts.

I appreciate any and all feedback, and I'm happy to counter-crit.

07-18-2011, 11:40 AM
Hey I read and critted the story where the story lives...