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Please critique my SPOOF query letter.
Dear Lit Agent,
Lance McWinslow is your average everyday Iguodalian. Then one day he begins receiving letters from the dead uncle he never knew he had. Now Lance must figure out if the uncle he never knew he had is really dead. If Lance fails he will not be able to inherit the kingdom of Iguodalia, for unbeknownst to Lance he is the half Crown Prince.
My 280,000 word political thriller, Delilah’s Dream, follows a young man who must chose between the uncle he loved and the kingdom he must lead.
Please contact me using the following enfo provided below. In your reply please note your qualifications for representing my work. If you don’t hear back from me within a week it is because I have not chosen you as my agent.
Sincerly,
J-Roc
Dear Lit Agent,
Lance McWinslow is your average everyday Iguodalian. Then one day he begins receiving letters from the dead uncle he never knew he had. Now Lance must figure out if the uncle he never knew he had is really dead. If Lance fails he will not be able to inherit the kingdom of Iguodalia, for unbeknownst to Lance he is the half Crown Prince.
My 280,000 word political thriller, Delilah’s Dream, follows a young man who must chose between the uncle he loved and the kingdom he must lead.
Please contact me using the following enfo provided below. In your reply please note your qualifications for representing my work. If you don’t hear back from me within a week it is because I have not chosen you as my agent.
Sincerly,
J-Roc