View Full Version : Critter wanted for m/m paranormal romance

06-29-2011, 06:39 AM
I am still looking for a critique or beta reader for a m/m paranormal (vampire) erotic romance novella. 18+ as it does contain erotic elements, mild bdsm, etc...

I have combined both novella's into one book, making it a 2 part book. The length would be around 55k 45K right now. The story is in first POV.
The first part is about Michael, a human who is inflicted with nightmares of his attack 10 years ago.
The second part follows Lucius, the vampire after reconnecting with Michael.

For a hint of my writing style and a little bit of story plot, you can check out my work in the erotica SYW part of the forum. Here (http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=210398) and Here (http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=216410) (both are 18+ and password needed)

The first novella was previously beta read, but I need someone else now that I've combined them.
I'm looking for someone who can help on grammar, etc. But I'm really thinking of a read-through, tell me what works, what doesn't and if you are awesome at vocabulary, that would be equally awesome!!

I'm also in no hurry anymore. But I'd like someone who is serious.

Camilla Delvalle
07-04-2011, 02:27 AM
Please let me read it. It smells like my tea.

I'll give you comments, but not so much on grammar. Since it's a short piece you'll hopefully get the comments within a week.

07-14-2011, 02:46 AM
send to me if you want too. I write that genre and read it obsessively :)

08-15-2011, 08:05 AM
Bump.. I am still needing someone!!

08-15-2011, 06:29 PM
Hi. I'm not the most experienced person, but I'd be more than willing to try beta reading, if you'd like. M/M romance is something I find appealing. :)

Sarah G
08-15-2011, 11:24 PM
Hi, I too would be willing to help but am the same as the person above. In that I'm not the most experienced beta. :)