Resubmission dilemma, help please

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NinaK

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Sorry in advance for the long post but any advice or help is greatly appreciated.

I recently received a request to revise and resubmit a contemporary romance MS I wrote for a call. It is my first submission and I made some rookie mistakes. The acquiring editor sent a very encouraging and detailed email with things I should address. They said that there was not a lot to fix and hoped I decided to resubmit.

I emailed the editor back indicating that I would most definitely revise and resubmit. As this call is scheduled for publication in October I asked about a timeframe for the reread. The editor responded with parameters but said not to worry because if time didn’t permit then they would consider my MS as a standalone.

The initial call was for novella length up to 45K; mine is a little more than 44K. While waiting for the verdict on my submission I wrote an expanded version of the story that is 72K. I figured if I received a rejection I would sub the expanded version to other targeted publishers. The 72K would qualify for both electronic and print publication; usually anything less than 50K is only electronic. Should I at any point tell the editor about the longer version, considering they have not made a definitive decision yet?
 

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I don't have experience with editors as of yet, so take anything I say with a grain of salt, but if they had mentioned to not worry about the "call" deadline and they might be able to market it as a standalone, then you might mention you do have a full-length version, and see which version they'd prefer. BTW, congrats on the R&R.
 

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Thanks Ambri, I appreciate your input.
 

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I would shoot the editor an email and mention that I had written an expanded version if they were interested in the ms as a stand alone instead of the call. Then just thank her/him and wait for a response.
 

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Totally ditto. One of my many mottos is that it never hurts to ask. But if the editor is interested in the longer version, first take a look at the R&R letter and see if any of it may apply to the expanded version and correct as you see fit.
 
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