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I am working on a nonfiction picture book. Would someone be willing to read the beginning? It's about 70 words.
I would like someone to tell me where the piece goes off "rhythm" and whether the piece is too dry. And, of course, anything that pops out (good or bad).
Shoot me a PM if interested.
I would like someone to tell me where the piece goes off "rhythm" and whether the piece is too dry. And, of course, anything that pops out (good or bad).
Shoot me a PM if interested.
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