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I just want a person to critique me, really.

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Not so much a mentor, but more of a helper-outer, heh.

I'm working on a novel. I'd call it a mystery/thriller hybrid, and I was just hoping that someone would read each chapter as I complete it and then just give me some feedback, corrections, etc.

My chapters are rather short, so it wouldn't be heavy reading. Short chapters for a fast paced novel with a healthy amount of characters, all intertwined under one 'umbrella' story. That's what it is.

If you are interested, please reply here with some form of contact information. I appreciate your generosity :)

- Sc00t
 

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Okay, you've got great manners, but your nose is a bit crooked and your hair should be parted on the other side.

Ohhh, you want your WORK critiqued. Sorry, I don't feel well-qualified enough to do that, otherwise I'd be glad to.

(Really, sooo sorry. I'm a bit of a smarta** this evening. I need slapped, I think!And there might even be a line forming for that . . .)
 

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There's a site called reviewfuse.com that is great if you are just looking for reviews. you should check it out, it's great!
 
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