Looking for a beta for my YA novel

Hello. I'm looking for someone to help me work on this novel I've been writing for about 3-4 years now. Any kind of help, really. Comments about the plot, grammar corrections, anything, really. I have 50 pages (not much for all the years I've been working on it, I know) and I'm hoping to get the final product to 300 pages before making an attempt at publishing. The plot is sort of complicated, but here's a brief synopsis:

It's about this girl in the 1600s who makes a deal with Death to spare her sister from dying from an illness. She'll replace her sister, but there's a cost. Instead of dying like everyone else when she dies, she'll be born into another life and start all over again. The story then picks back up in modern day. She's on her 17th life.

If you're interested please either reply to this thread or send me a private message. Thank you!





P.S: Copyright Angel_Faerie. Steal this story from me and I will lawyer up. This is a passion project for me.

fourlittlebees said:

At 50 pages, you are looking for a writing buddy or a crit partner, not a beta.

What is a Beta?

You might get a better response if you post a bit in Share Your Work. Lots of people are willing to crit, and it usually helps to get feedback from more than one person while you are in process.

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I've posted this in SYW before, but now it's gotten so massive it'd be a big mess to post it in there. And some things wouldn't make sense if I didn't post the entire thing.

Oh, and to the other two who've posted, it was half-sarcastic, half genuine.