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I'm finalizing a plot and could use some help ironing out the finer details.
It's a "push down the stairs with a final death blow to the head" theme (been done, I know, I'm creating my own version). The main plot is solving the murder.
My question is, I'm trying to set it up that the dead dude at the bottom of the stairs is said by the cops and autopsy report to be an accident (stairs are wood, he broke the banister on the way down, blunt force trauma to the head is cause of death). Murderer does push him, but also picks up an object to strike at the end. The item (see below) is wood as well, so the head blow can be made to look like he struck his head hard on the broken banister on the way down.
Proof is going to be finding the murderer with the possession of the particular object (an art piece) that has DNA (why don't they ever burn or destroy these things?) along with a list of other clues for motive and opportunity.
My question (finally!) involves with the police investigation regarding accident or murder, or how would the police handle falls down the stairs and what I might need to keep in mind regarding what is realistic for the police to consider? I know they might try to re-piece the banister back together, perhaps taking prints and checking alibis to make sure this guy was really alone and not with someone. (Murderer has a paid alibi.)
Murderer will be one of about three initial subjects that knows the person so fingerprints from all three will be there but doesn't prove one way or another as they were there all the time with the guy (before he died). So the stairs and banister would have shoe smudges and finger prints from all three potential suspects who can be accounted for.
For the art piece, it's an old Civil War pistol with a wooden handle. This is taken from the residence after the murder (the whole thing is not premeditation, the guy was angry, and trying to stop victim from tattling on him for something else). He tosses it in his car trunk, but then later forgets he did this (he was in a panic, most of that night is a blackout for him) and often goes back to look for this item he thinks he lost).
I'm unfamiliar with Civil War pieces but I know a lot of those items have wood handles. I was thinking he didn't shoot him but used the butt of the gun to hit the guy over the head. The final blow might be played off as a hit on the head by the banister on the way down. Since the gun piece is missing, and the banister is broken and right there, that a coroner may suspect it to be the banister, not suspecting anything else.
Or am I just sucky with this one and need a new direction? All of this happens off stage before the story starts, but I want to cover my bases to make sure the plot later to uncover this isn't unbelievable. Help is very much welcome.
It's a "push down the stairs with a final death blow to the head" theme (been done, I know, I'm creating my own version). The main plot is solving the murder.
My question is, I'm trying to set it up that the dead dude at the bottom of the stairs is said by the cops and autopsy report to be an accident (stairs are wood, he broke the banister on the way down, blunt force trauma to the head is cause of death). Murderer does push him, but also picks up an object to strike at the end. The item (see below) is wood as well, so the head blow can be made to look like he struck his head hard on the broken banister on the way down.
Proof is going to be finding the murderer with the possession of the particular object (an art piece) that has DNA (why don't they ever burn or destroy these things?) along with a list of other clues for motive and opportunity.
My question (finally!) involves with the police investigation regarding accident or murder, or how would the police handle falls down the stairs and what I might need to keep in mind regarding what is realistic for the police to consider? I know they might try to re-piece the banister back together, perhaps taking prints and checking alibis to make sure this guy was really alone and not with someone. (Murderer has a paid alibi.)
Murderer will be one of about three initial subjects that knows the person so fingerprints from all three will be there but doesn't prove one way or another as they were there all the time with the guy (before he died). So the stairs and banister would have shoe smudges and finger prints from all three potential suspects who can be accounted for.
For the art piece, it's an old Civil War pistol with a wooden handle. This is taken from the residence after the murder (the whole thing is not premeditation, the guy was angry, and trying to stop victim from tattling on him for something else). He tosses it in his car trunk, but then later forgets he did this (he was in a panic, most of that night is a blackout for him) and often goes back to look for this item he thinks he lost).
I'm unfamiliar with Civil War pieces but I know a lot of those items have wood handles. I was thinking he didn't shoot him but used the butt of the gun to hit the guy over the head. The final blow might be played off as a hit on the head by the banister on the way down. Since the gun piece is missing, and the banister is broken and right there, that a coroner may suspect it to be the banister, not suspecting anything else.
Or am I just sucky with this one and need a new direction? All of this happens off stage before the story starts, but I want to cover my bases to make sure the plot later to uncover this isn't unbelievable. Help is very much welcome.