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Beta wanted for Black Night Skies

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I'm looking for a beta reader for a short novella called Black Night Skies. It is a 22K gay vampire erotica that is very plot based. Let me add that it is written in first person.

I have had a beta read the first 6 chapters, however she is having some RL and internet problems.

If you would like to read a sample, I did post a short caption of the story at SYW erotica section. And I've been working on fixing that part to re-post again for more review.
Yes, this does mean any volunteers must be of age.

I'm looking for help with grammar and vocabulary, and in general, making sure the story stays on track and doesn't veer off. Also need some help increasing the word count.

Please PM me if you are interested :)
 
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