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Manuscript Swap: 85K Fantasy

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What the book is about (very, very short blurb): With a plague ravaging the land, a knight in exile must claim his destiny.

What I'm looking for: Someone to read the first four chapters or the whole manuscript, and offer honest feedback. Hard critiques are fine, as are general opinions. It's whatever you feel comfortable doing.

What I can offer in return: In exchange, I'll beta your first four chapters and give you honest feedback on any problems I spot with the story, the prose, and an opinion on where the story is headed.

We'll start with the first four chapters, and go from there.

Interested? PM me!
 
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I can do a swap, but I'd rather start with just the first chapter. I'll PM you.
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I'd be willing to look at it if you're looking for another opinion. Will pm you.
 
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