I'm working on my first MG novel and would love to have a mentor to guide me just a little bit. 
I think it fits best as magical realism.
Right now I'm looking for critiques of my first chapter. Am I getting to the action fast enough? Are you getting to know my characters? I would also like to be able to ask a few questions as needed.
I'm a teacher and educational freelance writer. You can find out more about me at www.teachersidea.com. I hope it doesn't break any rules to add that.
I really appreciate any help you're willing to give. A big thank you just for looking!
I think it fits best as magical realism.Right now I'm looking for critiques of my first chapter. Am I getting to the action fast enough? Are you getting to know my characters? I would also like to be able to ask a few questions as needed.
I'm a teacher and educational freelance writer. You can find out more about me at www.teachersidea.com. I hope it doesn't break any rules to add that.
I really appreciate any help you're willing to give. A big thank you just for looking!