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adarkfox
03-28-2011, 09:20 PM
What I Need: Someone (or two) to take a read through part or all of my finished MS. I am looking for pointing out errors in pacing, structure, character development and such in general. If you want to give me a painstaking line-by-line that's cool too, but I would be tickled to just have a read and general summary.

Manuscript in Question: Complete 83K work, YA category. It is contemporary setting with mild fantasy/magic elements (medieval-type fantasy). No vampires.

What I Can Give Back: General BETA-ness (you wouldn't want me checking your grammar, trust me) favor will be returned. Or tasty cookies. Or I will photoshop your least-favorite family member into an embarrassing photo for you to use as blackmail/personal enjoyment/entertainment for the next family reunion.

amkuska
03-29-2011, 01:23 AM
I'd be happy to do a novel swap with you. I'm looking for pretty much the same thing, general impressions of a YA/MG fantasy about half the length of yours.