Looking for some tips/criticism from an experienced book cover designer

A mock cover has been created for our graphic novel, however I think it could be better. So I am looking for input from one or more experienced book cover designers regarding our design.

Please email me at [email protected]. For confidentiality reasons, I do not want to post our cover here.

Thanks!

Eric Mullarky
New Baby Productions
www.NewBabyProductions.com