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LadyLex
03-02-2011, 11:54 PM
Hello!

I am looking for a beta reader for my suspense/thriller, B-FIVE (working title). B-FIVE is my first novel and I have gone over this at length, but I feel like I may be missing something. I need a fresh set of eyes. The novel is complete at 78,000 words. My pitch is:

Alexa Martinez is willing to do anything to protect her children, but will Alexa be able to escape her past? Or will her children suffer the consequences?

Here are a few details:
-the novel is set in Upstate New York, fictional city.
-Contemporary

Basically, I need major critique on the whole novel, or first 50 pages. If you are willing to help me, let me know via PM.

Thank you so much!

dondomat
03-11-2011, 05:54 AM
Overal impression playing the 'average Joe reader' plus one or more scenes of my choice under a magnifying glass is what I can do. Plus, if you have any specific questions like "is the bit where they shoot it out by the gas station too chaotic", for example :)

Update 13Mar 2011: :) offer withdrawn