some drug use and violence.
I'm looking for Beta's for this. It has already gone through a few rounds of Beta edits so the grammar problems will be minor.
I am mostly looking for reactions to the plot characterization etc.
[FONT="]Dear Agent X[/FONT]
[FONT="]Louisa Ramirez is immortal, forever nineteen and living in Miami. Some would consider it paradise, but for Louisa, 1920’s Miami is more like paradise lost. It has been centuries since her galleon washed up on these shores, and she has seen too many loved ones grow old and die. She’s tired of being a custodian to their memories. But now Louisa has fallen in love again. [/FONT]
[FONT="]Louisa would gladly sacrifice her immortality, but her life is not hers to give. She is bound to the nymph who once guarded the Fountain of Youth, and only she can release Louisa. In order to live a mortal life, Louisa must find the nymph, and return her to the Fountains’ waters. Standing in her way is Miami’s other immortal citizen, Juan Ponce De Leon. He has claimed the Fountain, and he will not relinquish his prize without a fight. [/FONT]
[FONT="]Complete at 97,000 words, THE NYMPH’S HEART is a Historical-Fantasy. [/FONT]
I'm looking for Beta's for this. It has already gone through a few rounds of Beta edits so the grammar problems will be minor.
I am mostly looking for reactions to the plot characterization etc.
[FONT="]Dear Agent X[/FONT]
[FONT="]Louisa Ramirez is immortal, forever nineteen and living in Miami. Some would consider it paradise, but for Louisa, 1920’s Miami is more like paradise lost. It has been centuries since her galleon washed up on these shores, and she has seen too many loved ones grow old and die. She’s tired of being a custodian to their memories. But now Louisa has fallen in love again. [/FONT]
[FONT="]Louisa would gladly sacrifice her immortality, but her life is not hers to give. She is bound to the nymph who once guarded the Fountain of Youth, and only she can release Louisa. In order to live a mortal life, Louisa must find the nymph, and return her to the Fountains’ waters. Standing in her way is Miami’s other immortal citizen, Juan Ponce De Leon. He has claimed the Fountain, and he will not relinquish his prize without a fight. [/FONT]
[FONT="]Complete at 97,000 words, THE NYMPH’S HEART is a Historical-Fantasy. [/FONT]
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