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I've read so much about queries and my query letter has gotten 7 partial requests.... however I do wonder about "missing information."
My plot is complex and there are some unexpected twists, including a big reveal about the true identity of one of the main characters that sort of changes the game for the others involved. But you just can't get all that into a paragraph or so.
Is it okay to simply say that John Doe Character has hidden something about his identity and leave it at that without explaining? Then if they read the full synopsis, which many of them do want along with the query, they get more info.
The reason I ask is that I had a big agency reject me with a very long letter saying that they loved my writing, called it sharp and witty, and then specific reasons they loved the 3 main characters, but ultimately rejected me because the scifi twist with that main character didn't appeal to them when they read the synopsis.
So... is my query deceiving if I don't mention that? And maybe another agent would like that twist and it would make them want to see the manuscript.
Does this make any sense? LOL
My plot is complex and there are some unexpected twists, including a big reveal about the true identity of one of the main characters that sort of changes the game for the others involved. But you just can't get all that into a paragraph or so.
Is it okay to simply say that John Doe Character has hidden something about his identity and leave it at that without explaining? Then if they read the full synopsis, which many of them do want along with the query, they get more info.
The reason I ask is that I had a big agency reject me with a very long letter saying that they loved my writing, called it sharp and witty, and then specific reasons they loved the 3 main characters, but ultimately rejected me because the scifi twist with that main character didn't appeal to them when they read the synopsis.
So... is my query deceiving if I don't mention that? And maybe another agent would like that twist and it would make them want to see the manuscript.
Does this make any sense? LOL