ETA: Thanks for all the contributions below! The ms is now out on submission, but I'll keep your feedback in case I need ideas for the sequel
seun's thread about stab wounds reminded me that I need to revise a fight scene near the end of my novel. The MC is armed with a rapier, fighting an opponent armed with a slightly heavier sword, and I need the MC to seriously disable his opponent but not kill him - and yet be in doubt as to whether he will have survived (the MC hightails it out of there!).
The victim has access to a good doctor and slightly better medicines than would historically have been available (this is fantasy, and I've already established that the doctor has herbal antiseptics and the like). I'd like the victim to make a slow recovery, with possibly some long-term disability as a result.
Suggestions?
seun's thread about stab wounds reminded me that I need to revise a fight scene near the end of my novel. The MC is armed with a rapier, fighting an opponent armed with a slightly heavier sword, and I need the MC to seriously disable his opponent but not kill him - and yet be in doubt as to whether he will have survived (the MC hightails it out of there!).
The victim has access to a good doctor and slightly better medicines than would historically have been available (this is fantasy, and I've already established that the doctor has herbal antiseptics and the like). I'd like the victim to make a slow recovery, with possibly some long-term disability as a result.
Suggestions?
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