I’m struggling with dialogue punctuation again. I think I need a grammar book. All the examples of dialogue tags on the web are nice obvious ones: he said, she shouted, and so on.
Here are three examples of where I’m uncertain:
Most of the rest outwardly ridiculed it, saying things like, “It’s only a theory; it’s not proven.”
Many of you reading this are probably thinking, But of course it’s true!
I think I was courteous and helpful, but the gist of my reply (and what I was thinking) was, “What on earth are you doing here then?”
The first I’m reasonably confident about. The second I think is right, but it just looks wrong - dunno why. I’m very wobbly on the last one.
But based on this statement that I did find on the web – “Dialogue tags are the phrases around dialogue that clarify who is speaking and possibly how and to whom that person is speaking as well” – then even “the gist of my reply was” has to be a dialogue tag...
But if any of them aren't dialogue tags, does the punctuation change?
Thanks for any help!
Jon
Here are three examples of where I’m uncertain:
Most of the rest outwardly ridiculed it, saying things like, “It’s only a theory; it’s not proven.”
Many of you reading this are probably thinking, But of course it’s true!
I think I was courteous and helpful, but the gist of my reply (and what I was thinking) was, “What on earth are you doing here then?”
The first I’m reasonably confident about. The second I think is right, but it just looks wrong - dunno why. I’m very wobbly on the last one.
But based on this statement that I did find on the web – “Dialogue tags are the phrases around dialogue that clarify who is speaking and possibly how and to whom that person is speaking as well” – then even “the gist of my reply was” has to be a dialogue tag...
But if any of them aren't dialogue tags, does the punctuation change?
Thanks for any help!
Jon
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