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Ann_Mayburn
01-15-2011, 09:44 PM
___BETA NO LONGER NEEDED- I have all the betas I need. Thanks for all the help!____

Hi guys and dolls!

I'm looking for a beta reader for my completed, 43k novella. It's my first foray into writing an action/adventure novella and I could use some feedback on how the story moves. There is M/M nookie, so if you're not into that kinda thang, this is not the book for you. :)

I'm not as worried about the grammer as much as the flow of the story. It may have some small grammer flubs, but I've worked out most of them...I think. Basically I just want to know if the story makes sense, has a good mystery element, and doesn't stink like load of laundry left in the washer for a week.

Please PM me, or you can reach me at ann_mayburn@hotmail.com if you're interested. Thanks.