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Hello, I don't normally write fiction (i'm a non-fiction writer), but I started a story about two months ago. The first three pages just came out really quickly, but now one of my characters is stuck in a diner and I can't seem to get her out of there.
Brief synopsis;
The story is a thriller/suspense. In the opening scene, a loud scream comes from an alley in the inner city. Three friends were hanging out on a street corner and heard the screams, but later on, a naked woman with blood curdling down her face ran towards them. One of the women (Lola) noticed that it was their friend, Rachel. She (Lola) sent the other character to a diner to get help. The character walks into the diner, becomes paralyzed with shock, and informs a waitress that her friend needs help. Meanwhile, the other character, Lola, is still with Rachel (the bloody character).
I can't move my character out of the diner or move the scene along. Do you have any tips?
Brief synopsis;
The story is a thriller/suspense. In the opening scene, a loud scream comes from an alley in the inner city. Three friends were hanging out on a street corner and heard the screams, but later on, a naked woman with blood curdling down her face ran towards them. One of the women (Lola) noticed that it was their friend, Rachel. She (Lola) sent the other character to a diner to get help. The character walks into the diner, becomes paralyzed with shock, and informs a waitress that her friend needs help. Meanwhile, the other character, Lola, is still with Rachel (the bloody character).
I can't move my character out of the diner or move the scene along. Do you have any tips?
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