My new WIP involves the protagonist's wife dealing with breast cancer. I'm really just at the outline stage here, trying to figure out how best to pull my plot together. I'd love to have input from anyone with experience in this area - namely, whether the progression is reasonable and if I've missed anything important. Also, if anyone could give me a sense of how much time would pass between each step, that would be SUPER. (I know each person's treatment is different, but I don't want to accidentally have something take, say, a week, that should realistically be more like months.)
1. Routine mammogram has an irregular result.
2. A more thorough mammogram confirms that there is a mass in her breast.
3. A biopsy is taken, and several days later the doctor calls to confirm that it's cancerous.
4. Consultation to discuss treatment options. Doctor and patient agree to proceed with lumpectomy to remove the mass.
[Note: After this point is where things get a bit fuzzy for me.]
5. Some time (?) after the lumpectomy, a lymph node biopsy is performed. The results are not positive. (Would one say that the lymph node is cancerous? Or indicative in some other way?)
6. A mastectomy is performed, but the cancer has metastasized.
7. Chemotherapy for a period of time leads to eventual remission.
Okay does that sound reasonable? Basically I want it to seem not THAT serious at the beginning - okay, just a lump, we'll get it removed - but then by the end it's truly life threatening and scary. However I do want to be able to say at the end that she's in remission. I'm a big proponent of keeping the "action" of a story within the shortest timeframe possible, so I'm hoping this could take no more than 1-2 years after the original diagnosis. Yes/no?
Thanks in advance for any and all help.
1. Routine mammogram has an irregular result.
2. A more thorough mammogram confirms that there is a mass in her breast.
3. A biopsy is taken, and several days later the doctor calls to confirm that it's cancerous.
4. Consultation to discuss treatment options. Doctor and patient agree to proceed with lumpectomy to remove the mass.
[Note: After this point is where things get a bit fuzzy for me.]
5. Some time (?) after the lumpectomy, a lymph node biopsy is performed. The results are not positive. (Would one say that the lymph node is cancerous? Or indicative in some other way?)
6. A mastectomy is performed, but the cancer has metastasized.
7. Chemotherapy for a period of time leads to eventual remission.
Okay does that sound reasonable? Basically I want it to seem not THAT serious at the beginning - okay, just a lump, we'll get it removed - but then by the end it's truly life threatening and scary. However I do want to be able to say at the end that she's in remission. I'm a big proponent of keeping the "action" of a story within the shortest timeframe possible, so I'm hoping this could take no more than 1-2 years after the original diagnosis. Yes/no?
Thanks in advance for any and all help.