View Full Version : YA fantasy novel

12-21-2010, 10:28 AM
Hey, I have a novel that's gone through 4 incarnations (over 3 years!) under the guidance of my agent, but it now needs to be simplified and made clear and dramatic. My agent, Kelly Sonnack, says it's a "fresh, original, and
exciting fantasy world" but I do too much overt world-building and have too many characters and details that slow the pace. Anyone want to do a reading exchange?