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Hi, I'm writing a fanfiction right now that I hit a wall:
My character, who is Brazilian, ran away from Rio de Janeiro with two Federal Agents to US. To make a long story short, she is helped by the Drug Lord of the place where she lived as her father worked for him up until his death, and she wasn't aware of this little fact until later... much later.
When she arrives in US, etc etc... she goes through Immigration, they find drugs inside some of her things.
She wasn't aware that the drug lord, without her knowing, stuffed drugs in her things so she could smuggle them into America. She was under surveillance of the two Feds, and she had no idea of of the drugs. Neither did the Feds.
How should I work the scene at the airport?
Here is a website I've found about the subject, but I'm afraid of being too ahhh .... harsh on the descriptions if I follow the comments on it.
http://www.experts.com/showArticle.aspx?Articleid=132
My character, who is Brazilian, ran away from Rio de Janeiro with two Federal Agents to US. To make a long story short, she is helped by the Drug Lord of the place where she lived as her father worked for him up until his death, and she wasn't aware of this little fact until later... much later.
When she arrives in US, etc etc... she goes through Immigration, they find drugs inside some of her things.
She wasn't aware that the drug lord, without her knowing, stuffed drugs in her things so she could smuggle them into America. She was under surveillance of the two Feds, and she had no idea of of the drugs. Neither did the Feds.
How should I work the scene at the airport?
Here is a website I've found about the subject, but I'm afraid of being too ahhh .... harsh on the descriptions if I follow the comments on it.
http://www.experts.com/showArticle.aspx?Articleid=132