View Full Version : Focusing on the plot alone for now

11-28-2010, 10:45 PM
I hope this is this the place for this, but what I need for now is not necessarily a beta reader, but more along the lines of someone to help me make sure my plot makes sense/stays on track and doesn't stray too far from a particular line of thought/is actually decent.

Is there someone who is good with that? I have plenty of threads (and have had plenty of time to develop this), I just kind of need help making sure I've got the right idea with where I see this heading.

This is a multiple book project, so far I'm only focusing on the first book (though I've developed ideas that would be explained in later books).

Help anyone? Thanks.

11-29-2010, 02:26 AM
What kind of genre is it? I'm looking for a plot helper as well, maybe we could swap?

11-29-2010, 05:38 AM
I will read through your story and give you my honest opinion, if you would like to swap. I usually do line by line critiques. I'm looking for someone to read through my story (YA Fantasy of 75,000 words) and make sure that, overall, it keeps your interest and essentially makes sense.

Send me a PM if you're interested.