I'd be very grateful for any medical advice to help me write this situation.
19th century and the Battle of the Alma. I have two wounded soldiers in an entire field of wounded soldiers, one of whom has been shot in the lung. I don't need to know specific treatment (the poor guy's going to die long before that stage) but I wonder if anyone can tell me:
1. What symptoms would show to the utterly untrained observer - eg does the cliched 'blood-flecked foam' on the lips have any basis in reality? He has a little hole in his back, of course (duh!), but is there anything other than that which could tell his companion where the bullet is? Would it be at all like pulmonary edema, eg would his face be pale and sweaty, and very gradually get the bluish tinge? Any coughing in the later stages?
2. Is there anything his companion could do to make him more comfortable? He has no medical knowledge, but I'd rather he didn't do something stupid that a trained reader would recognize as making things worse. Eg -
At present he props the guy up, but would he be better lying him down? At present he gives him a sip of water, but is that dangerous?
At present he moves him slightly into the open where he's got a chance of being seen by the 'bandsmen' with the stretchers, but would that be fatal?
At present he tries to dress the wound, but would he be better not mauling the guy about at all?
3. What symptoms would the injured guy feel? Pain from the wound itself, of course, but would (for instance) his breathing be bubbling and painful? I've had pneumonia and pleurisy, so if it's at all similar I can do this bit myself!
4. Is it credible for him to speak a little, or would that be impossible? I'm imagining only in short sentences, but I'd like him to manage those if he can.
5. Is it credible for him to die in about 3-4 hours? I'd like him to if he can.
The musket ball can be lodged deeply in the lung, it can have just chipped it, it can be wherever we want it to be and we'll never find out where it was.
I'm so sorry, this is a lot of questions in one. If anyone can give a minute to help out a complete ignoramus I'd be very grateful.
Louise
19th century and the Battle of the Alma. I have two wounded soldiers in an entire field of wounded soldiers, one of whom has been shot in the lung. I don't need to know specific treatment (the poor guy's going to die long before that stage) but I wonder if anyone can tell me:
1. What symptoms would show to the utterly untrained observer - eg does the cliched 'blood-flecked foam' on the lips have any basis in reality? He has a little hole in his back, of course (duh!), but is there anything other than that which could tell his companion where the bullet is? Would it be at all like pulmonary edema, eg would his face be pale and sweaty, and very gradually get the bluish tinge? Any coughing in the later stages?
2. Is there anything his companion could do to make him more comfortable? He has no medical knowledge, but I'd rather he didn't do something stupid that a trained reader would recognize as making things worse. Eg -
At present he props the guy up, but would he be better lying him down? At present he gives him a sip of water, but is that dangerous?
At present he moves him slightly into the open where he's got a chance of being seen by the 'bandsmen' with the stretchers, but would that be fatal?
At present he tries to dress the wound, but would he be better not mauling the guy about at all?
3. What symptoms would the injured guy feel? Pain from the wound itself, of course, but would (for instance) his breathing be bubbling and painful? I've had pneumonia and pleurisy, so if it's at all similar I can do this bit myself!
4. Is it credible for him to speak a little, or would that be impossible? I'm imagining only in short sentences, but I'd like him to manage those if he can.
5. Is it credible for him to die in about 3-4 hours? I'd like him to if he can.
The musket ball can be lodged deeply in the lung, it can have just chipped it, it can be wherever we want it to be and we'll never find out where it was.
I'm so sorry, this is a lot of questions in one. If anyone can give a minute to help out a complete ignoramus I'd be very grateful.
Louise
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